انواع پاراگراف های بدنه در سوالات رایتینگ تسک ۲ آیلتس: قبلا گفته شد که هر پاراگراف بدنه Body در مقاله های آیلتس IELTS Essays سه بخش اصلی داشت. این سه بخش عبارتند از جمله ی موضوع (Topic Sentence / Main Idea)، توضیح موضوع (Development/Clarification)، و پشتیبانی (Support). پاراگراف های بدنه می توانند در انتها یک جمله خلاصه Summary نیز داشته باشند. در این نوشته، نمونه هایی معتبر و موثق که خود ممتحنین آیلتس نوشته اند برای متقاضیان آیلتس گردآوری شده است.
Cambridge IELTS 10, Test 1, Writing Task 2 – IELTS Essay
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
IELTS Examiner Sample Answer for body paragraphs:
To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents.
To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behaviour. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones – an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.